purple glow of
Just beautiful … beautiful!
I love this. It just feels good on the tongue, and makes me feel all glowy inside – Not a great explanation, but true 🙂
You captured dusk at my house in your words. Beautiful!
Lovely little poem. You are not mediocre! Beautiful, fragile image.
wow, a beautiful ode to a serine summer night.
Succint. Like the soft shadows and purple glow. Strong rhymes.
as you made us pause in the moment to contemplate…very nicely penned minimalist…
Lovely and sweet.
in a word, “breathless”.. really quite lovely to read out loud.
great one shot!
Each little phrase contains specific beauty, unique imagery. The sweet rhyme sings.
I was living this just last night — love summer.
Just to pause and look for a moment, which you make the reader do, nice.
Stunning ode to mid summer night.
Wish I was the dragonfly! Beautiful words and image.
I loved the short, rhyming poem of yours. It provided a cool warmth on this summer day here, at my blistering home.
What a lovely verse. Soft yet sure.
and i exhale. summer evenings spoken in so few words.
Delicate tranquility in this piece. Your rhyme is lovely here ~ Rose
pause in mid flight… that is now.. and beautiful verse… I liked it. It touched my thoughts…
Om Namah Shivaya
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